Wednesday, October 13, 2010

my very first paragrah

i just rote my very very first perragraph !!! without relizing. It''s so funny. Im going to write a story later with lots of paragrahs. Its so fun. when my dad gets home Im going to show him.
Here it is.

I Wish I Could Go To Disneyland.

I wish I could go to Disneyland. I reallly want to try out the rides. I bet thay are fun. I have always dremed of seeing the characters. I really want to go on a famliy holaiday far away. I never been to disneyland but i really really really want to go. the end.
I just love writeing storys. It's so fun I can't beleve i did i't.

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